Not all bad experiences produce complaints; some prompt a thank you
Choosing dialogue as the narrative device really works for this piece. Very good pacing and story development!
Thanks! Dialog seemed like the quickest way to pull off flash fiction. With any other more traditional narrative device the story would have ended up longer--a case of "I made it longer because I didn't have time to make it shorter."
That was good to read. Keep writing more.
Choosing dialogue as the narrative device really works for this piece. Very good pacing and story development!
Thanks! Dialog seemed like the quickest way to pull off flash fiction. With any other more traditional narrative device the story would have ended up longer--a case of "I made it longer because I didn't have time to make it shorter."
That was good to read. Keep writing more.